Wednesday, 12 September 2018

Speech Judging Sheet


Name:  Jason             
Topic: Children should be able to bring any IT devices to school                          
Category
Main Points

Self Assessment
Low                                         High
1           2 3           4 5
Structure

 
My speech was organised logically into paragraphs, with an effective introduction and a conclusion.
3
Delivery

 
I used some gestures, stood still and made eye contact with my audience.

My voice was clear and loud.  I didn’t speak too quickly or too slowly.

1
Content
 
My speech had a message and was original, interesting and relevant to the audience.

2
Language

I used ‘powerful’ words in my speech.  I also included some language features (eg repetition, alliteration, similes etc)
1
Time

My speech was between 2 ½ and 3 ½ minutes long.
4



Next time I need to:
add more language features


Teacher Comment:  
Jason, you spoke at a good pace and had a clear voice.  Your next steps are to show more enthusiasm and expression and be a lot louder.

Tuesday, 28 August 2018

My customised note

  My customised note 
  









I put the sky tower on my note to represent NZ.

I put the ANZ bank on my note because it’s a popular bank in NZ.

I put Countdoun on it because it is a popular supermarket in NZ.

Wednesday, 27 June 2018

George's grandma

Is Is your grandma warm, cuddly, kind and loving?  Well if she is she's very different to George’s grandma.  


George's Grandma doesn't smile very often, when she does smile it is really scarily at George with her teeth grinding together.  Around her pale brown teeth is her mouth that looks like a dog bottom, and above that sits her witch like nose.


Grandma is an old hag. She says that “you should always grow down not up”. She is a grisly old grunion.


Now if only there was a Medicine that could make that horrible hag disappear.


Sunday, 24 June 2018

Jason's Marvelous Medicine

Sleep tight

Sleep tight

I am going to describe what happens when people dream.


Dreaming
When people dream their dreams are as long as 20 minutes. Although you are sleeping your ears are still working scientists have done a test to a sleeping man with tapes repeating his girlfriend’s name the electric waves carried the message through his brain, his brain got faster.      


How much sleep
Usually when people sleep adults sleep about 7-8 hours and babies sleep for 16-17 hours, as people get older they need less sleep.


What people can be seen while sleeping
Some people turn over, bang their head on the pillow.
Some people suck their thumb, talk ,pull faces, paddle their legs as if they are
Riding a bike or walk in the
ir sleep.
How scientist know that your brain is working ?
Scientists know that your brain is still working when you sleep you have dreams.


Why heart beats more slower when you sleep
A child's hearts normally beat faster than an adult's. ... Kids' heart rates can be as low as 60 beats per minute during sleep and as high as 220 beats per minute during  physical activity.