Sunday 18 October 2020

The volcano

 Jason

‘Crrrr’’ Crrrrrrr’’ kaboom’ the volcano roared as lava spewed out like a dragon's fire. Smoke filled the air and out came a hog like a face constructed by the cloud of darkness. What was even worse was that behind the red hot Gew was that the smoke was brewing up a lighting storm ‘Zapp’ the storm ‘BOOMED’.The snow melting makes it look like vanilla ice cream on oreo shell  

“Jason” I heard in the distance it was my Lil brother 

“ What is that loud noise?” he asked, 

“Jack run!!!!” I replied, the lava was getting closer to our house I picked up Jack and Scampered away, after about half an hour the lava reached our house I could smell the smoke


Wednesday 9 September 2020

 The race



Splash squelch Splash squelch the kids running across the mushy mud. Trees swaying gracefully from side to side. Two kids jumping over the hurdle giving it they’re all to overtake the other. The clouds fighting the sun for a wet or sunny day. There is a flower under the hurdle lucky to be alive. A kid on the sideline rushing to overtake the kid in first place. In the back, a man exits the toilet. The toilet walls as green as lime the roof as dark as wet grass. I see floodlights in the distance as tall as two streetlights stacked on top of each other. Parents cheering on their children while shivering.


On this cold wet miserable day, I wish I was warm and happy to my house 



Sunday 30 August 2020

the winning lotto ticket

 WALT write an explanation

Purpose: To inform

Audience: Room 2, parents, other classes, blog readers


WALT write an introduction:

I must remember to:

  • Use a hook to get my audience interested.

  • Include reasons and examples to support, e.g.

    • why winning the lotto is very unlikely

    • What happens to people who do win the lotto

    • More effective ways to make money

  • Check my punctuation and spelling is correct, and try to improve some of my vocabularies


Title: winning lotto


Introduction


“I am going to tell you the odds of winning lotto you are more likely to get struck by lightning or killed by a teacher and the odds of that is astronomically low although I beat the odds Jhon continued“I was on a trip to Kuala Lumpur however just before we landed I got a call from my brother colin he said “Jhon something amazing just happened what were your lotto numbers “ then I said “ your Joking he said no I’m not you won the lotto “ if you were wondering how did I do a call on a plane I got first class + I got free internet when we were exiting the plane I got boycotted by lightning so I didn’t beat the odds although at least I’m still alive to tell the story today “ ok and how did it feel to be struck by lighting Jhon “ Jhon replied with “ I don't know as soon as it touched my skin I fainted due to the immense heat … pt 2 coming in 94381037589347589432758 Millennium


Wednesday 5 August 2020

The old railroad

The old railroad 



One day some children were tramping in the woods in doing so they found a really old railroad ( the boys were daredevils) they each decided to walk across the 100m high railroad although when the first boy went across (Jake) he disappeared the other 2 boys Jason and Isaac saw him disapp]. eared Isaac said “ok let’s run” but just as Isaac started running Jason grabbed his shoulder and said “you don't know what Jake is facing in there we gotta go in and help” “but but ohh ok” Isaac responded “let’s go” so they both walked over the railroad well Isaac was very slow Jason ran like a superhero when Jason got into the portal right behind him the portal disappeared he saw tons of exotic things. Although there was something off he was underwater, he swam up and up but no matter how far he swam he could not reach the surface. 

Though there was an upside he could breathe while underwater, then suddenly a portal opened It was Isaac he bumped Jason’s head “we need to find Jake” Jason said in a bubbly voice “ok” Isaac responded although there was no need Jake just appeared from all the sea life in front of them “Jake” Isaac and Jason exclaimed “hey guys come over here” Jake responded so they all swam through the sea life “wow” Jason and Isaac said, there was a star that had different colours on each side Jason said “can we take them” “IDK” Jakob responded so they took one each Jason took the red one Jakob took green and Isaac took blue they each held them closer to examine suddenly the stones disappeared Jason said “wow” “what if we somehow got powers from that” “ohhh” yea I totally think we got powers” (they were being sarcastic) little did they know they did have powers now back to the sarcasm “ohh yea why don't I try to shoot a fireball “Jason said his hand started bubbling up and a ball of fire came out “wow’ they all said “how ah how did I do that “ Jason said “I don't know Jakob responded “ hey Jake Isaac why don't you try” they put their hand up facing the sea life Isaac was able to move the fish with his hand “ wow “ Jakob’s blast was a green blast when it touched the fish the fish started zapping each other “wow” “we got powers” Jason said Jake got energy I got fire and Isaac got psychic” then Isaac said “what does psychic mean “ Jason said “ it is a power where you can control movement with your mind” then Isaac started controlling Jason he made Jason go upside down then Jason said “we can mess around a wise man once said with great power comes great responsibility “ “huh “ jake and isaac said “look we just have to keep these powers a secret DON'T ASK ME WHY if you do its so that government don't do no tests on us so if you wanna use these powers then wear something to hide your identity “ Jason said “ok “ Isaac and Jake said “we could be superheroes and save the world “ they said “ok wait i think im feeling something “ what is it “idk but its strong and it's pulling me like a 2700000 year old incstinct “ they all started feeling it and they swam to the detonation it was a portal back when they got through they were all wet they testet to see if the still had powers and infack they did but they burnt down a tree with them although ther was one problem a man was standing on a hill looking at them





The  end