WALT write an explanation
Purpose: To inform
Audience: Room 2, parents, other classes, blog readers
WALT write an introduction:
I must remember to:
Use a hook to get my audience interested.
Include reasons and examples to support, e.g.
why winning the lotto is very unlikely
What happens to people who do win the lotto
More effective ways to make money
Check my punctuation and spelling is correct, and try to improve some of my vocabularies
Title: winning lotto
Introduction
“I am going to tell you the odds of winning lotto you are more likely to get struck by lightning or killed by a teacher and the odds of that is astronomically low although I beat the odds Jhon continued“I was on a trip to Kuala Lumpur however just before we landed I got a call from my brother colin he said “Jhon something amazing just happened what were your lotto numbers “ then I said “ your Joking he said no I’m not you won the lotto “ if you were wondering how did I do a call on a plane I got first class + I got free internet when we were exiting the plane I got boycotted by lightning so I didn’t beat the odds although at least I’m still alive to tell the story today “ ok and how did it feel to be struck by lighting Jhon “ Jhon replied with “ I don't know as soon as it touched my skin I fainted due to the immense heat … pt 2 coming in 94381037589347589432758 Millennium
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