Sunday 16 December 2018

Where am I?

Where am I?


The car park is full of screaming kids in their cars for their mums to unlock the doors “ out we go” “ye ha” .


When you get inside you can hear SPLASH!, WOOHOO, “Waaaaaa” “mum,dad
Come this is so fun”
BOW BOW BOW BOW
It’s time for the waves
Yaaaaaaaaaaaaa
————— “no strangling” “OK sorry

“Dad can we get some chips” “OK my darling”
“that will be 5$ for 1 packets of chips” “here is money” “here is chips” “yummy

2 comments:

  1. i like how you used onomatopoeia in your description

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  2. Great describing it is so hard to figure out where you are. Dylan room 5

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