Monday, 17 December 2018

My Toy Meerkat (Jack)


My Toy Meerkat (Jack)
My dad and I were going to the supermarket to get bread.  When we got to the checkout, I saw a meerkat in a bathrobe and tie.  “Daddy, come look! Can we get it?”
“OK.”

When I got home, I was so excited to name him so I named him Jack.  Jack and I were best mates. One day, my dad let us camp in the back garden.  When it was time to camp we got our tent out and set it up. After we set up the tent, it was so late!  It was about 8:00pm and when we got in our tent, we fell straight asleep.
When it was morning, we woke up and got breakfast. We had weet-bix, rice pops and warm milk.

I still have Jack, my best mate.  He has recently been hanging out with me at school.  He quietly sleeps in my tote tray or patiently waits for me to take him out to play.  I am so glad that my dad agreed to buy him for me!

the end

Sunday, 16 December 2018

Where am I?

Where am I?


The car park is full of screaming kids in their cars for their mums to unlock the doors “ out we go” “ye ha” .


When you get inside you can hear SPLASH!, WOOHOO, “Waaaaaa” “mum,dad
Come this is so fun”
BOW BOW BOW BOW
It’s time for the waves
Yaaaaaaaaaaaaa
————— “no strangling” “OK sorry

“Dad can we get some chips” “OK my darling”
“that will be 5$ for 1 packets of chips” “here is money” “here is chips” “yummy

Wednesday, 12 September 2018

Speech Judging Sheet


Name:  Jason             
Topic: Children should be able to bring any IT devices to school                          
Category
Main Points

Self Assessment
Low                                         High
1           2 3           4 5
Structure

 
My speech was organised logically into paragraphs, with an effective introduction and a conclusion.
3
Delivery

 
I used some gestures, stood still and made eye contact with my audience.

My voice was clear and loud.  I didn’t speak too quickly or too slowly.

1
Content
 
My speech had a message and was original, interesting and relevant to the audience.

2
Language

I used ‘powerful’ words in my speech.  I also included some language features (eg repetition, alliteration, similes etc)
1
Time

My speech was between 2 ½ and 3 ½ minutes long.
4



Next time I need to:
add more language features


Teacher Comment:  
Jason, you spoke at a good pace and had a clear voice.  Your next steps are to show more enthusiasm and expression and be a lot louder.

Tuesday, 28 August 2018

My customised note

  My customised note 
  









I put the sky tower on my note to represent NZ.

I put the ANZ bank on my note because it’s a popular bank in NZ.

I put Countdoun on it because it is a popular supermarket in NZ.